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The short sequel to my previous poem "To my lost lover"
The link to it can be found in the description.
I advise you read that first but it's not necessary.


Oh my dear, sweet Derpy
I knew nothing of your pain
But if I had one more chance
I would choose this again.

For people here do need me
Only I can save them now
Although there's one small problem
I have yet to figure how

I'm so sorry that I left you
It should not have been this long
To assure you that I am fine
I thought I'd write this song

Although I've travelled far
Know that you're always near
In my heart I always hold you
In my memories I hear

As usual I've failed you
I have left you all alone
No trace of where I am now
If only I had known

I came to this small moon
With intent to grab a gift
But whilst I was out shopping
In time, opened a rift

People ran as they did panic
Only I was cool and calm
This thing is normal for me
But those here could still take harm

It's still so hard to focus
Without you by my side
But knowing that you are safe
I'll never have to hide

I shall not tell you more
Lest you fear for my welfare
Do not worry for my safety
Try your hardest not to care

I'm in a distant place
And I truly miss my love
For words can still not show to you
The sadness I write of

For now, please don't worry
Whilst in battle I am strewn
I'll be fine as long you're safe
And then I'll be home soon.
I have not written anything for a long time so I though I'd create a short one.
This is a response/sequel to my previous poem "To my Lost Lover", I hope you enjoy reading it and if you enjoyed it, do check out MLP-Literature.

MLP-Literature is a group focused around the collection and creation of literature.
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Thanks to tinuleaf for the thumbnail which I derived from this picture.

Reddit link here - Someone's taking my worthless internet points!
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Aquashy Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THIS . IS. A . WORK. OF. ART. I really like it ... it made me feel , feeling Danisnotonfire: FEELS Supernatural - Paranoid Dean Happy Clap this is so beautiful I can't even describe it . It really shows how much the doctor cares for derpy .
Wolvesforever567 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
It's such a nice poem.
JR1smith Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Writer
It's just so.. Fantastic!
ihategeorgethetree Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Javott Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*sniff* *sniff* WWWWAAAAAHHHH!!!!!! SO SAD!! SO SWEET!!!
youpickmyname Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Glad you liked it :D
GreenWolf123 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
loading feelings... failed to load... to many feels
GreenTeaSocks Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconexplodingplz: that's me. You made me explode.
madrigles Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
I love tinuleaf's work.
youpickmyname Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
He does great art, I almost forgot to credit him

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